D#6, HW#7, Grammer Assignment

I review my mistakes on WP#1, i saw some errors in using the correct tense also i missed a few commas, although i revised the sentence to flow better without commas. In due, i went back to Purdue Owl online site and reviewed the advanced depth tabs i did not notice on last grammer deadline that contained much more information and examples. Then in turn with everyone else i summited my paper to turnitin.com following the syllabus.