Monday, December 3, 2007

D#15, HW#1, Peer Review WP#4 x2

x2:

Justin Winter WP#4


Coralee Harding WP#4

Thursday, November 29, 2007

D#14, HW#1, Draft Cover Letter

(This week...big reading and deadline reflection.)

Started Drafting WP#4, Reflection Cover Letter

(Look in de 'old google documents)

Wednesday, November 21, 2007

D#13, HW#1, Grammer

Well like most humans i have occasional bloopers and forget simple writing skills. In this turn i review the "OWL" site and pulled two revision paragraphs with wording mistakes(RED) and what i would do to replace them(BLUE).
#1
For example, for the most part throughout the world it is against multiple countries laws [in most of the countries around the world, it is against the law] to murder another human without significant cause. Since the earliest times of the human society, it has been instinctively programmed into the brain to save lives. This is still evident in today’s society through hundreds of volunteer search and rescue crews; in addition to the publication of multiple stories in which lives are saved by “plain Joe” [average] citizens.
#2
Many such as those opposing a cloning ban [ Many of the people that oppose a cloning ban], due to the restriction of research, they [erase] do not realize that it allows anyone with good or ban morals to effectively create mayhem at free will.





D#13, HW#7, Deadline Reflection

DONE!, its the weekend yay. Well over all i at times believed this class was to hard and sometimes had an excessive amount of homework. It was beneficial to stretch out my writing skills, which need constant tweaking, and write a paper. This deadline i was able to use the moderator control of post and just have a drop view of my post to review for the content i would refer back to.


POSTINGS:
Coralee D#13, HW#1
Kathy D#13, HW#3
Stephann D#13, HW#7

D#13, HW#6, Notes on Deadline Reflections

I believe that deadline reflections are pretty much like my reading reflections as i typically almost feel i am writing the same content, but i will have to say i feel my deadline reflections as a method to relieve my stress of getting homework done and my chance to kinda speak out to the class in a simple carefree method. I will most likely be using and referring back to my deadline reflections as times where i struggled and experienced difficult or time consuming activities.

D#13, HW#5, Notes on Reading Reflections

Chapter 12 i will be using to refer back to my figurative language examples and usage. Chapter 15 was simple MLA formatting which i mostly already know. Chapter 6 was the Toulmin outline which i definitely like and have used before. Chapter 8 was definitions. Chapter 2 was types of arguments such as pathos and ethos. Chapter 19 was like sources for dummies, won't be needing. Chapter 8 was on revision which i strongly believe helps ANY paper.

D#13, HW#4, Notes on Project Reflections

I will definitely turn back to my research proposal project because this was a first and i do believe it help get the kinda knowledge of what was going on in the class. In addition, this project acted as my guideline on what my paper was centered on and what resources i needed such as the credibility. Over all my WP#3 will be useful as a "completed" work that i used the semesters forced skill improvement task to help my abilities.