Well like most humans i have occasional bloopers and forget simple writing skills. In this turn i review the "OWL" site and pulled two revision paragraphs with wording mistakes(RED) and what i would do to replace them(BLUE).
#1
For example, for the most part throughout the world it is against multiple countries laws [in most of the countries around the world, it is against the law] to murder another human without significant cause. Since the earliest times of the human society, it has been instinctively programmed into the brain to save lives. This is still evident in today’s society through hundreds of volunteer search and rescue crews; in addition to the publication of multiple stories in which lives are saved by “plain Joe” [average] citizens.
#2
Many such as those opposing a cloning ban [ Many of the people that oppose a cloning ban], due to the restriction of research, they [erase] do not realize that it allows anyone with good or ban morals to effectively create mayhem at free will.
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Ya I have also made some small stupid mistakes. Just got to look them over. good job
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