D#12, HW#4, Selected Word Choice

In block number three i had to be most critical in my word choice due to the argument containing pathos, emotion. Specific words and examples given where such as shopping for a kid like a dog while walking by a mall window. This was important to connect efficiently with the audience or reader to grasp the argument contained. There was two important sections in which my structure was important. The intro and conclusion had to be crafted as to allow a critical reader to effectively grasp the concepts in the paper without confusion. Also, the format provides a standard and ease of readability. I believe that there should not be one "section" devoted to punctuation because if used effectively your writing should include it throughout your paper and work. While, I know this one area of improvement, I do work to create punctuation that presents a list correctively such as my thesis statement in the last sentence of first paragraph.